We tried to use WOW words in our writing.
We wrote sentences to tell what:
I saw...
I heard...
I felt ...
I wondered
Here is some of our fabulous writing
I saw lightning flashing and striking.
I heard thunder booming and rumbling.
I felt scared and frightened.
I wondered how the hail splashes the water.
Macca
I saw yellow lightning flashing in the sky.
I saw hail exploding on the ground.
I heard thunder booming like drums.
I felt scared.
I wondered when it is going to stop!
Christopher
I saw thunder and lightning booming and flashing.
I saw the greyish, blackish stormy clouds.
I saw rain pouring.
I felt a little bit scared.
I heard striking and booming at my house.
I wondered if it would stop.
I wondered if the lightning would make a hole in my roof.
Naomi S
When I saw the lightning it was whole sky lightning.
The hail was bouncing and exploding on the ground.
I heard booming thunder.
The rain flooded the road.
I wondered if a sky-scraper got hit by the lightning.
I felt amazed.
Stan
I saw zigzag lightning and the clouds together.
I heard thunder booming on the ground - it was loud.
I felt very very cold.
I wondered if it was dangerous.
Muhummad
I saw lightning it was close to my house.
The lightning and thunder was loud, it was flashing and zipzapping.
I felt scared.
I wondered if my TV would explode.
Vuitton
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